Writing is Easier When I don’t have Time for It

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Hey all, I have some updates before we get into the blog post. First, is that I am finally done teaching summer school which means I will have more time to get out posts on our regular weekly schedule rather than once ever two weeks. Number two, is that we are past June 30th which means it is time for our Writers Toolkit giveaway. I am going to do the drawing tomorrow morning and contact the winner. Once everything is confirmed, Iโ€™ll release their identity here in a future post.

The only other bit of news is that I will be gone from July 15th until the 29th for military training. Since this is only two weeks, I already have a blog post ready to go and thus shouldnโ€™t be much of a bump in our schedule. I hope everyone is having an awesome day, and thanks for stopping in!

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Hypocrite


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52-Week Writing Challenge: Week 27
A scene from an ongoing (never-ending!) WIP. Quinn Landon canโ€™t get a break! Determined to divorce the adulterous Oscar Landon, she can find no respite from her familyโ€™s judgment and harassment. Quinn draws a line in the sand when older brother, Aaron Clark, shows up at her job.

Aaron held out his hands in front of him. โ€œQuinn, be reasonable. Just because a man has a little fling or two on the side, it does not mean he doesnโ€™t love his wife.โ€

She froze, willing herself to not throw the stapler on her desk at her brother.

โ€œWhat does it mean, Aaron?โ€

Caught off his guard, Aaron scrubbed his hand down his face, โ€œIt just a guy-thing, Quinn. Not a big deal.โ€

Quinn dropped the stack of files she was holding and leaned across her desk.

โ€œWhat about you, Aaron? Is it just a guy thing for you too?โ€

Aaron Clark folded his arms across his broad chest again and returned her glare. โ€œThis isnโ€™t about me.โ€

In the span of seconds, Quinn saw the truth in his eyes.

She was crushed.

Quinn covered her gaping mouth with her hand, shaking her head. She stood and walked over to her office windows still reeling from her brotherโ€™s non-admission.

Tears formed in the corners of Quinn Landonโ€™s eyes. No. She would not cry. Enough tears were already shed over a situation that didnโ€™t deserve them. Quinn looked over her shoulder at Aaron.

โ€œThis isnโ€™t about Oscarโ€™s infidelity, is it? This isnโ€™t about his betrayal of our marriage, or myโ€ฆ what did you call it? Inability to be reasonable?โ€

She turned and fully faced him.

โ€œThis is about male privilege. Guys just being guys, right? Who else, Aaron? Who else gives lip service to their marriage vows? Junior? Clinton? Daddy?โ€

โ€œNow, sis. If youโ€™d just calm down and think-โ€

โ€œOh, Iโ€™m calm, Aaron. Probably calmer than Iโ€™ve been in the last five years. Iโ€™m glad you came here today, Aaron. Youโ€™ve given me not only true clarity, but the resolve to follow my heart and my mind. Now, get out.โ€

โ€œQuinn-โ€

โ€œI said get out. And Aaronโ€ฆ never come here again. If you do, Iโ€™ll have you removed by security.โ€

โ€œQuinn! Listen to what youโ€™re saying! Weโ€™re family, for godโ€™s sakes!โ€

โ€œWeโ€™re siblings, Aaron. Something we had no say about. But family?โ€

Quinn returned to her desk and sat in her chair. With a small, bittersweet smile, she continued.

โ€œFamily is always there for you. They support you, lift you up and cheer you on. They love you unconditionally. My family doesnโ€™t do that for me. When I think about it, the Clark family abandoned me and supported Oscar even before we were married.โ€

โ€œBut it all makes sense now. I donโ€™t know why I didnโ€™t see it before. No one was shocked and appalled when I found out about Oscarโ€™s first affair. It was me everyone told to calm down. It was me who was told to not do anything hastyโ€ฆ to think things through.โ€

The small smile faded from her lips.

โ€œIt was me who was shamed because I wanted to end my marriage. All because my family doesnโ€™t see adultery as wrongโ€ฆ for men. They rant and rave about the sanctity of marriage and how itโ€™s ordained by God, and is forever. But adulteryโ€ฆ itโ€™s just a little thing. A minor detail. Forget that itโ€™s listed in the Bible as a reason for divorce, or on Godโ€™s top ten list. Noโ€ฆ no. Men are entitled to a little tail on the side every now and then. Godโ€™s a guy, he understands, right?โ€

โ€œQuinn, youโ€™re-โ€

โ€œHow would you feel if Vanessa had an affair? Or two? Three? How many have you had, Aaron?โ€

โ€œVanessa would never-โ€

โ€œHypocrite!โ€

โ€œI take care good care of my wife. Iโ€™ve given her everything sheโ€™s ever wan-โ€

Quinn bolted from her seat.

โ€œExcept honesty and fidelity!โ€

โ€œIโ€™ve always been honest with Vanessa.โ€

โ€œOh! Well, thatโ€™s different. If you tell her up front youโ€™re a lying, cheating asshole, itโ€™s okay.โ€

โ€œQuinn-โ€

โ€œI believe you were leaving.โ€

โ€œQuinn-โ€

โ€œGoodbyeโ€ฆ brother.โ€

โ€œThis isnโ€™t over, Quinn Avery.โ€

โ€œYes, Aaron. For me, it is.โ€

He held her gaze as he backed toward the door.

โ€œNo, it isnโ€™t. If you go through with this divorce, youโ€™ll pay a steep price youโ€™ll never recover from.โ€ Aaron left, leaving her office door open.

Stunned, Quinn stood there, her mind replaying her brotherโ€™s words.

โ€œโ€ฆ youโ€™ll pay a steep price youโ€™ll never recover from.โ€

What the hell?

 

ยฉFelicia Denise 2017

Filter Words and Phrases to Avoid in Writing Fiction…

Chris The Story Reading Ape's avatarChris The Story Reading Ape's Blog

Filter words act like a veil between the reader and the character

by Kathy Steinemann ย on Anne R. Allen site:

This article provides a list of writing filters, with practical examples of how to replace them. Youโ€™ll also find exercises that can double as story prompts.

All words exist for a reason. Use them wisely to create engaging narrative.

Why the fuss?

Filter words form a barrier that distances readers from a story.

Bertie felt the warm sand between her toes as she walked.

Bertieโ€™s experience is relayed secondhand. When word economy is critical, this approach works. However, wouldnโ€™t you rather become so involved that you almost feel it yourself?

With a few tweaks, we can strengthen the sentence.

The sand trickled between Bertieโ€™s toes, radiating warmth with every step she took.

Strong verbs, trickled and radiating, amplify the sensory impact.

Five senses? Six? Twelve?

Most people can nameโ€ฆ

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Distinguish Your Characters With Dialect

Writing your first novel-Some things you should know's avatarWriting your first novel-Things you should know

BizarroDay-edDo your characters have their own voice or do they sound the same? I had a critique partner tell me that she couldnโ€™t distinguish characters in my manuscript based on dialogue.ย They all sounded the same. If I hadnโ€™t provided a dialogue tag,ย she would have had no idea which character was speaking. She was right.

This was something I definitely had to correct. So I did some research,ย watched a webinar, and took a class on dialogue.ย Distinguishing between characters is a lot easier than you would think.

One way to differentiate characters and determine who they areย is through dialect.ย  We can learn a lot about a person based on their accent, grammar, and choice of words.

You donโ€™t have to ask a person if they are from the North or South-just listenย to how they speak and note their word choices.ย  While this is one of the most obvious examples for me, youโ€ฆ

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