
Originally posted December 2018 as part of my #52Weeks52Stories Challenge
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#52weeks52stories: Week 52
Word prompt: smack
Word count – 429
Reading time – 1 mins, 42 secs
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Frozen in Time, Part 1
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βPlease donβt come here again.β
The battered woman trailing police to the front door turned and whispered in a hard voice, βYou donβt understand. This was my fault. I shouldnβt have pushed Elliott about coats for the kids.β
Petra Gwynn smirked. βYou remind your husband your three children are wearing nylon jackets in freezing temps and he has the right to smack you around?β
Sonia Milan glanced over her shoulder at the cops standing next to their squad cars.
βElliottβs been through a lot. He lost his mom at a young ageβ¦ lost friends while serving in the middle-east and got an injury that ended his military career. He has to be handled a certain way.β
βBullshit! Heβs not the first person to lose someone or get injured in combat. Those are excuses, Sonia.β She turned her neighbor toward the hallway mirror. βLook at your face. Thatβs not how you treat someone you love.β
Soniaβs temper flared, and she whirled around to face her neighbor.
βDonβt you dare judge my husband. You have no idea what itβs like for him. Keep your opinions to yourself and mind your own damn business.β
Petra clenched her fists hanging at her sides.
The freakinβ nerve!
She approached Sonia until their noses were almost touching.
βThatβs exactly what I was doing until you banged on my door. You cried out for my help. You begged me to call the police.β
She brushed past her clueless neighbor and stood by the open front door.
βAnd you are leaving my homeβ¦ now.β
Kowtowed, Sonia turned for the front door.
Petra thrust her arm out blocking the womanβs path.
βHe needs help, Sonia, before something even worse happens. But if you donβt care about yourself or somehow feel you deserve to be his punching bag, think of your children. They see everything and forget nothing. And itβs doing more damage than you can ever imagine.β
Soniaβs jaws tightened, and she pushed past Petra, storming down the walkway.
Closing the door, Petra sagged against it as the anger dissipated from her body.
I shouldnβt have lost my temper. Sonia needs understanding, not my contempt. Elliott has beaten her down so low, she believes sheβs to blame for his shortcomings.
Petra slid to the floor, remembering the look of terror in her neighborβs eyes when sheβd first answered the door.
It was the same look sheβd seen in her own motherβs eyes for most of her life.
To be continued…
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