
Originally posted December 2018 as part of my #52Weeks52Stories Challenge
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#52weeks52stories: Week 52
Word prompt: smack
Word count – 429
Reading time – 1 mins, 42 secs
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Frozen in Time, Part 1
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โPlease donโt come here again.โ
The battered woman trailing police to the front door turned and whispered in a hard voice, โYou donโt understand. This was my fault. I shouldnโt have pushed Elliott about coats for the kids.โ
Petra Gwynn smirked. โYou remind your husband your three children are wearing nylon jackets in freezing temps and he has the right to smack you around?โ
Sonia Milan glanced over her shoulder at the cops standing next to their squad cars.
โElliottโs been through a lot. He lost his mom at a young ageโฆ lost friends while serving in the middle-east and got an injury that ended his military career. He has to be handled a certain way.โ
โBullshit! Heโs not the first person to lose someone or get injured in combat. Those are excuses, Sonia.โ She turned her neighbor toward the hallway mirror. โLook at your face. Thatโs not how you treat someone you love.โ
Soniaโs temper flared, and she whirled around to face her neighbor.
โDonโt you dare judge my husband. You have no idea what itโs like for him. Keep your opinions to yourself and mind your own damn business.โ
Petra clenched her fists hanging at her sides.
The freakinโ nerve!
She approached Sonia until their noses were almost touching.
โThatโs exactly what I was doing until you banged on my door. You cried out for my help. You begged me to call the police.โ
She brushed past her clueless neighbor and stood by the open front door.
โAnd you are leaving my homeโฆ now.โ
Kowtowed, Sonia turned for the front door.
Petra thrust her arm out blocking the womanโs path.
โHe needs help, Sonia, before something even worse happens. But if you donโt care about yourself or somehow feel you deserve to be his punching bag, think of your children. They see everything and forget nothing. And itโs doing more damage than you can ever imagine.โ
Soniaโs jaws tightened, and she pushed past Petra, storming down the walkway.
Closing the door, Petra sagged against it as the anger dissipated from her body.
I shouldnโt have lost my temper. Sonia needs understanding, not my contempt. Elliott has beaten her down so low, she believes sheโs to blame for his shortcomings.
Petra slid to the floor, remembering the look of terror in her neighborโs eyes when sheโd first answered the door.
It was the same look sheโd seen in her own motherโs eyes for most of her life.
To be continued…
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