A Reader’s Review

Every author wants book reviews. If those reviews happen to be 5-stars, it’s a banner day. But when that review is detailed, and the reader’s favorite scenes/characters were the same ones you agonized about and lost sleep over? It simply doesn’t get any better than that. Heartfelt thanks to author A.C. Melody.


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Title: In The Best Interest of The Child

Author: Felicia Denise

Genre: Womenโ€™s Fiction/Psychological/Romance

Rating: 5 Wholehearted โ™ฅโ€˜s

I want my own Bellamy! Before you get any ideas, itโ€™s not just for the man, himself โ€“ but his entire cray-cray, laugh-out-loud, we do everything with passion family! Grab your box of Kleenex, youโ€™re going to cry, especially when you laugh. Grab your beverage of choice and a guilty pleasure kind of snack, because oh yeahโ€ฆitโ€™s that kind of book.

Olivia Chandler has been through more than any person should ever have to go through and all of it prior to her eighteenth birthday. As the product of a broken foster care system, Olivia has taken what precious knowledge and resources her late father has given her, her own brains and a spine of steel to forge a career for herself as a Child Advocate of the Court. An attorney who prides herself on specializing in keeping children out of foster care by any decent means necessary. Unfortunately, this has resulted in years of hard work as an excuse not to deal with her own childhood trauma and to keep people at arms length no matter what.

When she gets a new case that closely mimics the childhood tragedy that forever changed her lifeโ€“too much for the worstโ€“Olivia finds herself facing a frightened, abandoned, haunted and betrayed little girl whom no one seems to give two cares aboutโ€“and itโ€™s not her new client, Rena Averest. Itโ€™s Livvie Chandler, herself. That girl still thriving inside of her, unable to heal.

Bruce Bellamy knows all about abandonment, and not just his own. When his wife walked out on him and their young children it did a number on him in many ways, making it difficult to trust in second chances. The first time he lays eyes on Olivia Chandler, though, all that changes. He can see right through her professional facade and down into the sad, yet genuinely compassionate woman bound and determined to stand for Rena Averestโ€“a little girl who means a lot to him and his family.

Let me tell you, Bruce is pure charm. I have never read a male lead with more sincere charm than this man and Felicia wrote him so well, that it doesnโ€™t come across as pretentious or nauseating. Even his persistence is charming! He made me laughโ€“and swoonโ€“right alongside Olivia. I wonโ€™t spoil anything, so youโ€™ll have to read the book to know if all his fast-talking persuasion does him any good! โ€œThat man.โ€

Then you have the Bellamy family โ€“ strike that, theyโ€™re a clan. I think I counted no less than three or four generations of Bellamy under their roof at one time. They are the big, loud, boisterous and loving family taking care of Rena Averest, and as soon as they recognize Oliviaโ€™s intentions to do the same, they adopt her as one of their own. I canโ€™t even begin to describe these characters, theyโ€™re the kind of relatives youโ€™d love and dread having at the same time, because I doubt anything gets by them!

Most of the time during reading this book, I had tears in my eyes. From living through Oliviaโ€™s horrid past, the frustration over what Renaโ€™s being put through due to sheer incompetence by so-called professionals, all of the amazing supporting characters and from the truly fantastic humor Felicia weaves into the plot in all the right places. The dialogue was a little confusing for me at first, having one person speak and another person react all in the same sentence could make it hard to tell who was doing the talking, but once I got used to that pattern, it became easy to read.

I loved how genuine all of these characters came across, whether they were good or bad, they were written wholeheartedly. I wasnโ€™t left feeling any disappointment at all in the end. Even though this story is going to continue โ€“ (Yay! Does the happy dance) โ€“ everything that was a plot point in this book was tied up by the end, with the exception of what is to continue, but thatโ€™s explained immediately. I was very, very grateful for that! I canโ€™t wait to read the next installment, and I highly recommend this book to everyone. I donโ€™t care what your preferred genre is, read it. I also recommend that it be made into a movie, pronto. I want to curl up on my couch with my coffee, Kleenex and snacks and watch it asap.

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โ™ฅ This is an Honest Review of a book that I purchased. I have not received anything in exchange for this review from the author, to include an ARC.

The Best Laid Plans #NaNoWriMo

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I literally began thinking about NaNoWriMo 2016 during last yearโ€™s event, and chose the WIP I decided against for NaNoWriMo2015. I began the pantserโ€™s version of plotting and planning right after Camp NaNoWriMo in July. Work with me here.

Outline? Check!

Synopsis? Check!

Tagline? Check!

Logline? Check!

Scene list? Oh, yeahโ€ฆtwenty-two scenes ready to go!

I veered just slightly off course Monday morning (October 31st) when I was pulled into service to babysit for my two-year-old grandnephew, Jordan, who was too ill to attend day care, but not too ill to wear me, the mister AND Max, the dog out! My โ€œbabyโ€ will be twenty-five next month, so itโ€™s been quite a while since I toddler-wrangled. I stuck to my writing schedule, with a few changes, but accomplished little else. After a few flash fevers and several hundred Kleenex, Jordan was pronounced well enough to return to day care and left Friday morning.

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The one and only Jordan!

 

Peace and order restored, right? Time to kick in the afterburners and up the word count, right?

Whatever.

Iโ€™m deep into scene eleven this morning, when I noticed heroine/protagonist, Quinn Landon, sitting over in the cornerโ€ฆarms folded and shaking her head. I knew that wasnโ€™t a good thing. Our exchange went something like this.

Felicia: Whatโ€™s wrong, Quinn?

Quinn: Itโ€™s not right.

Felicia: Whatโ€™s not right?

Quinn: That sceneโ€ฆand the three scenes before it.

Felicia: Do NOT start with me. YOU gave me these scenes!

Quinn: I was confused. You know how upset I was with my family.

Felicia: You were not that upset. You were jumping up and down and talking a mile a minute!

Quinn: Itโ€™s not right.

Felicia: What do you expect me to do โ€“ rewrite these scenes?

Quinn: You must.

Felicia: Not going to happen.

Quinn: Itโ€™s not right.

Felicia: Quinn, I am halfway through the scenes I prepared listening to you and your dysfunctional family. If that doesnโ€™t get me to 50K, I will have more writing to do. Iโ€™m not re-writing anything at this point.

Quinn: Itโ€™s not right.

Felicia: Stop saying that.

Quinn: What if I stop talking altogether? What then?

Felicia: This becomes a paranormal story and you speak from the grave. George R.R. Martin has made killing off lead characters an art form.

Quinn: No! Donโ€™t do that. I donโ€™t want to miss out on Mason! *Swoons*

Felicia: See? Three scenes back you wanted Fletcher!

Quinn: Donโ€™t reprimand me. Iโ€™m a woman in crisis.

Felicia: *Massive eye-roll*

Quinn: Canโ€™t we at least discuss this?

Felicia: *Sighs* You know none of this is written in stone. You changed your name, profession, and reason for divorcing Oscar before I even wrote a word. Just keep track, and weโ€™ll discuss it in January during the first edit, okay?

Quinn: YAY! Okay. I can do that!

Felicia: Good. Now let me get back to upping this word count.

Quinn: Umโ€ฆcan we discuss my name too?

Felicia: Goodbye, Quinn!

 

Who knows what this read will end up looking like? I sure donโ€™t!

Stay tuned!

 

 

“Writing is WORK!” #Update

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Wow! What a month Iโ€™m having!

I go from diligently working on finally getting my first novel published, to balancing three WIPs!

Why didnโ€™t someone tell me this is WORK? I donโ€™t want to work, I just want to write. Oh, well. That being said, Iโ€™m definitely deep into it. In The Best Interest of the Child went live on September 30th โ€“ but who knew it would have a BOOK TWO? I surely didnโ€™t! SURPRISE! With a word count of nearly 150K, I had to back off and streamline book oneโ€ฆand it still came out at three hundred pages! But book one has NO cliffhanger โ€“ I loathe those! Book two will be another leg in Olivia Chandlerโ€™s journey (and it had better end in book two โ€“ who knows with my characters).

Since the second book is mostly written, I was shooting for a release date of somewhere between December 1 and the 15th. However, my editor is currently handling a family emergency, so I may move the release date to January. Yes, I know I could get another editor, but she did a great job with the first book and knows the story line โ€“ why tamper with a working formula?

What will be releasing soon is the print version of book one! Iโ€™m a big fan of print books and still buy them frequently. Okay, too frequently. But other print lovers have sounded off loud and clear. Itโ€™s a go for December!

My NaNoWriMo project is shaping up quite nicely. The working title is โ€œFor Worseโ€ (as in โ€˜for better or for worseโ€™) and tells the story of Quinn Landon, who finally files for divorce from her lying, cheating husband, and believes sheโ€™s on a new path to a new life. Only, she isnโ€™t.ย  More about โ€˜For Worseโ€™ as we get into NaNoWriMo country.

This is the coverโ€ฆand please do not fall out and have a fit! Itโ€™s just a placeholder for NaNoWriMo. I would not subject the planet to my limited, amateurish art skills. Maybe one day.

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