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“Cecil, you know those guys you were with? They’re not friendly guys like you, and they’re also not street punks. They run the streets for their local gangs, but it doesn’t end with them.”
Arrogant to the end, Cecil smirked. “You trying to make a point, Detective?”
Pat Sinclair leaned against the doorframe, crossing his ankles and folding his arms. “My point is we picked up two million dollars in cash, and coke with a street value of over six million. Your new friends? They deal in hundreds… maybe thousands, but millions? There’s someone bigger at the center of this. They didn’t get the drugs and we confiscated their money; someone will have to answer for that.”
Excerpt from “Burned”
by Felicia Denise
What’s done in the dark always comes to the light.
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From The Watcher:
He blamed Monica Montgomery for his predilection.
Four years his senior, the nineteen-year-old had lured him to her bedroom and introduced him to sex… and erotic asphyxiation.
Terrified at first, he soon learned how the right amount of pressure on her carotid arteries enhanced her orgasms. Her heightened arousal and reaction were a turbo boost to his own and soon he couldn’t have sex without the strangulation hold.
When he arrived at Monica’s for one of their weekly visits, she stopped him at the doorway with a kiss on the forehead and informed him she was headed to Europe to continue her education.
His devastation only worsened when he learned days later, Monica Montgomery moved to Germany… with her fiancé.
Despite his good looks and wealth, high school girls weren’t throwing themselves at him and he was miserable until he got to college.
He found some college coeds were more adventurous and had no problem with his request, yet most girls found it a total turn-off and whispers of pervert and weirdo grew around him.
By his senior year, he was frustrated and humiliated. He stopped frequenting the local favored eateries and pubs of the college crowd and ventured into more adult hot spots, which is how he met the lusty Vanessa.
Encouraged by the older woman’s enthusiasm as she dragged him from the nightclub, he didn’t make his usual sexual request.
Which was a mistake.

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by Felicia Denise
Cover Design: perry elisabeth design
Genre: Crime Thriller / Suspense / Short Stories
Release Date: June 1, 2020
Malice – noun; mal·ice | ˈma-ləs
1 : desire to cause pain, injury, or distress to another
//
2 : intent to commit an unlawful act or cause harm without legal justification or excuse
//ruined her reputation and did it with malice
Everyone is capable of malice and no one is immune to its outcome.
A Hint of Malice – When her last living relative commits suicide after having her identity and assets stolen, a grieving niece longs for justice.
Burned – When the masterminds behind a major drug operation get off with a slap on the wrists, a frustrated police detective warns them their wealth cannot shield them from everything.
The Marshall Sisters – After seeing her sister mistreated by far too many men, Leslie Marshall is proud of Paula for standing up for herself and accompanies her on a cold winter’s night to confront her boyfriend, but even Leslie isn’t ready for the new, assertive Paula.
The Watcher – Shamed into exile by his family because of his sexual fetish and hanging on to the shreds of his sanity, a man plots the ultimate date night with his new neighbor.
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About the Author
Currently working on projects in several genres, Felicia plans to release book 2 of In the Best Interest of the Child – Family Matters, as well as anthologies of her suspense and women’s fiction short stories in 2020.
A long-time blogger, she also features books by indie authors daily on her blog, Nesie’s Place.
Felicia lost her husband of nearly 36 years of May of 2019 and is a strong advocate and supporter of the National Kidney Foundation. She has three adult children, four grand-pups, and as one of nine children, she has too much extended family to even go into!
In her free time-when not reading-Felicia sews and enjoys experimenting with new dishes in the kitchen. She always has a cup of robust coffee and far too many pun jokes nearby.
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by Felicia Denise
Cover Design: perry elisabeth design
Genre: Crime Thriller / Suspense / Short Stories
Release Date: June 1, 2020
Malice – noun; mal·ice | ˈma-ləs
1 : desire to cause pain, injury, or distress to another
//
2 : intent to commit an unlawful act or cause harm without legal justification or excuse
//ruined her reputation and did it with malice
Everyone is capable of malice and no one is immune to its outcome.
A Hint of Malice – When her last living relative commits suicide after having her identity and assets stolen, a grieving niece longs for justice.
Burned – When the masterminds behind a major drug operation get off with a slap on the wrists, a frustrated police detective warns them their wealth cannot shield them from everything.
The Marshall Sisters – After seeing her sister mistreated by far too many men, Leslie Marshall is proud of Paula for standing up for herself and accompanies her on a cold winter’s night to confront her boyfriend, but even Leslie isn’t ready for the new, assertive Paula.
The Watcher – Shamed into exiled by his family because of his sexual fetish and hanging on to the shreds of his sanity, a man plots the ultimate date night with his new neighbor.
What’s done in the dark always comes to the light.
KINDLE UNLIMITED

About the Author
Currently working on projects in several genres, Felicia plans to release book 2 of In the Best Interest of the Child – Family Matters, as well as anthologies of her suspense and women’s fiction short stories in 2020.
A long-time blogger, she also features books by indie authors daily on her blog, Nesie’s Place.
Felicia lost her husband of nearly 36 years of May of 2019, and is a strong advocate and supporter of the National Kidney Foundation. She has three adult children, four grand-pups, and as one of nine children, she has too much extended family to even go into!
In her free time-when not reading-Felicia sews and enjoys experimenting with new dishes in the kitchen. She always has a cup of robust coffee and far too many pun jokes nearby.
~ Stalk Felicia on Social Media ~
Author Website | Blog | Facebook | Twitter | Amazon Author Page
Instagram | Pinterest | Goodreads | Newsletter


by Felicia Denise
Cover Design: perry elisabeth design
Genre: Crime Thriller / Suspense / Short Stories
Release Date: June 1, 2020
Malice – noun; mal·ice | ˈma-ləs
1 : desire to cause pain, injury, or distress to another
//
2 : intent to commit an unlawful act or cause harm without legal justification or excuse
//ruined her reputation and did it with malice
Everyone is capable of malice and no one is immune to its outcome.
A Hint of Malice – When her last living relative commits suicide after having her identity and assets stolen, a grieving niece longs for justice.
Burned – When the masterminds behind a major drug operation get off with a slap on the wrists, a frustrated police detective warns them their wealth cannot shield them from everything.
The Marshall Sisters – After seeing her sister mistreated by far too many men, Leslie Marshall is proud of Paula for standing up for herself and accompanies her on a cold winter’s night to confront her boyfriend, but even Leslie isn’t ready for the new, assertive Paula.
The Watcher – Shamed into exiled by his family because of his sexual fetish and hanging on to the shreds of his sanity, a man plots the ultimate date night with his new neighbor.
What’s done in the dark always comes to the light.
KINDLE UNLIMITED

About the Author
Currently working on projects in several genres, Felicia plans to release book 2 of In the Best Interest of the Child – Family Matters, as well as anthologies of her suspense and women’s fiction short stories in 2020.
A long-time blogger, she also features books by indie authors daily on her blog, Nesie’s Place.
Felicia lost her husband of nearly 36 years of May of 2019, and is a strong advocate and supporter of the National Kidney Foundation. She has three adult children, four grand-pups, and as one of nine children, she has too much extended family to even go into!
In her free time-when not reading-Felicia sews and enjoys experimenting with new dishes in the kitchen. She always has a cup of robust coffee and far too many pun jokes nearby.
~ Stalk Felicia on Social Media ~
Author Website | Blog | Facebook | Twitter | Amazon Author Page
Instagram | Pinterest | Goodreads | Newsletter


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Do you know someone who’s serious all the time?
You know the type you tell a joke or a funny story then they feel compelled to break it down, analyze it and explain the rationale?
Yeah, those people.
Author E. B. White once said, “Humor can be dissected as a frog can, but the thing dies in the process and the innards are discouraging to any but the pure scientific mind.”
My older brother was like that from the ages of twenty-five to forty.
Everything was a debate, discussion, or monologue. Even when I believed a conversation was over, he’d come back with more supporting facts or data. It was exhausting being around him.
We had seven other siblings, and when the rest of us were busy with the shenanigans and tomfoolery, big brother was always the ice-cold bucket of water tossed on the fun. We called him “The Pope” and no, we’re not Catholic.
I was a member of the wedding party when he got married at twenty-five (to a woman with a great sense of humor). Then he moved to the east coast, I moved to the west coast, and we met up at our parents’ once a year in the Midwest.
It worked.
I’m not sure what caused it, but something happened as he approached forty which made him dust off the dull and polish up his sense of humor. Suddenly, he found the humor in even the most morose situations.
We all exhaled and sighed in relief. Even our mom and he’s her favorite.
Life is serious.
But life is also funny, and it’s the humor that gets us through the serious, bad times.
Humor diffuses situations and lightens moments, and in those moments we often find clarity.
Humor is different things to different people. One person might dissolve into a fit of laughter over a joke or humorous situation while another might say, “I don’t get it.” The opportunity for humor was there even if it didn’t work for everyone.
It’s the same way with books.
No two people read the same book. We’re all different, so, we approach books with different mindsets. Two people can love the same book but for different reasons. A person can love a book so much they want the entire human race to read it while another can hate it with a passion intense as ten flaming suns. They want to burn the book, bury the ashes, salt the ground, and never speak of it again.
People are funny that way.
But most can agree a book must contain certain things to hold their interest, make them care, and inspire them to read on.
Developed characters with personalities – they don’t have to be liked (it helps) but readers should be on their side.
Conflict – and it should be believable
Pacing – the story cannot drag but readers don’t want to be rushed through scenes either.
A developed storyline or plot – what makes the reader care?
Satisfying conclusion or HEA – aliens are defeated, the world is saved, good guy gets the girl.
For me, there also must be humor.
I’m not referring to laugh-out-loud, thigh-slapping humor, although in some genres like Romantic Comedy, that’s what is expected.
Rhetoric or hyperbole can be used to create humor, or the irony of the current situation can be humorous but it needs to be in the story because it’s real.
The fun-loving, loyal sidekick takes a bullet for the story’s protagonist. During his death scene, he motions for his buddy to lean in close and whispers, “You know I was supposed to be off today, right?”
He still dies, it’s still sad, but it’s not depressing.
Who reads to get depressed?
In the midst of serial crimes, brutal beatings, and missing persons, I will find a way to insert humor.
Because art imitates life.
“Life does not cease to be funny when people die any more than it ceases to be serious when people laugh.”
George Bernard Shaw

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Character development—or lack of—can make or break any story.
And just as the protagonist must be fleshed out so does the antagonist.
We may or may not like the antagonist.
They could be truly evil, intent on destroying the very fiber of goodness.
Or their actions could be a defense mechanism in place because of a tortured past or traumatic event.
It doesn’t matter. They’re standing in the way of the protagonist’s HEA or causing them harm, so someone must deal them with.
But shouldn’t we know at least some of what is driving them?
No one wants to destroy good just for the hell of it. I mean… it’s good! Doesn’t everyone like good? What happened to our character to make good bad for them? What was the trauma that built a wall around them? Were they betrayed by some they trusted? Loved?
I addressed some of these things with the villain in Sins of the Mother. I didn’t have the time or opportunity to go too deep with him, but I found out about his history. While I may not understand why he commits the crimes he does, I believe I understand how he got that way.
And I want to save him.
But much like Quasimodo in The Hunchback of Notre Dame and Erik in The Phantom of the Opera, the fate of my antagonist is sealed from birth. While he doesn’t have a physical or facial deformity, his soul is deformed and his mind, fractured. By the time I meet him, he is unredeemable.
I have to let go and allow him to play his part in my protagonist’s journey.
But I don’t have to like it.
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Day 8 word count – 16101
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Camp NaNoWriMo’s week one is done and gone!
How did you do?
I’m happy with where I’ve landed, just still in shock I’m writing suspense. Wasn’t I supposed to be writing romance? Well, that never happened.
Check out the board! I’ve got Act 2:1 completed!

Act 2:1 is the most difficult because that’s where all the mystery and unknown elements leave everyone scratching their heads. (Me, included!)
That’s not saying Act 2:2 will be a piece of cake but thank goodness for revisions!
Remember, this began as a piece of flash fiction back in March, And, YES, I know… 41K is not considered flash fiction anywhere in the cosmos. The story kept growing and growing, and when I said, “I don’t want to do this anymore,” the characters grabbed me and said, “Oh, you’re doing it!”
What? Your characters don’t talk to you?
Weird.
Okay! Last Sunday I posted the working cover for Sins of the Mother—this week, the synopsis!
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A serial rapist is terrorizing Marbury, his victims all elderly women over seventy.
With her husband off on a business trip, fifty-three-year-old Sally Bennett is home alone, making plans for their wedding anniversary bash.
That is until the former Army medic has to fill in for a coworker at Angels Assist Care Agency and spend the night with a seventy-year-old client, Graciela Ramirez.
Gary Sievers is seething with rage—fifty years’ worth.
At last free of the monster who kept him imprisoned since birth, Gary sets out into a world he’s seen only through the Internet, allowing his anger to spill free a little at a time.
He’s invisible to the world, his existence known about by only a handful and most of them are long since dead. But his crimes are growing… and making headlines.
Gary wants the life stolen from him, he wants to find the twin brother he never knew existed, and he wants revenge on the woman responsible for it all.
The captive has become the monster looking for his own twisted brand of justice.
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FYI—I wrote the synopsis about ten days before Camp Nano began and it has since changed but I’m not rewriting it… yet.
Next week, an excerpt!
Have a great week two! Happy writing!
Day 7 word count – 14461
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